My Dream
    Everyone has a lot of dreams.  Some people want to be rich, dreaming of becoming millionaires overnight. Others want to be famous, dreaming of suddenly jumping to great fame. I have a lot of dreams,too. When I was a young girl, I dreamed of becoming a scientist like Hua Imogen in future. However, I knew very well that I could not succeed without painstaking efforts. So I studied hard in the middle school and college in order to attain my goal.
    After graduating from, college, I found a job as a teacher. Although I was very busy with teaching, I never gave up my goal. I read a lot of books to get more knowledge. I made experiments to practise and apply what I had learnt from the books. Sometimes, I was so deeply indulged in my research that I forgot my meals and time. Now I have made great progress. Several of my research papers have been published. The methods proposed in my papers have been proven to be valuable for the solution of some problems. I am very happy. The ladder of becoming a scientist is still far ahead, but I have climbed the first rung anyway.

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    本文为一篇记叙文。文中第一段为夹叙夹议，以general comment开头，引出“我的梦想”。第二段为作者为实现梦想所做的努力和取得的成果，最后一句“成为科学家的阶梯还遥遥在上，但我至少已攀登了第一级。”既是总结又是方向。此句摹仿了Jack London 的散文“What Life Means to Me”中的一句精彩
句子。

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